I am currently trying to bring all my work into the computer. I have already changed the first 2 panels to better fit Miles' explanation of how to stronger tell the story.
It opens on the sun in the sky, the second panel still viewing the house, but this is where the talking happens so the writing goes left to right, shows the 3 men outside this home, and provides a sense of mystery hopefully, as they are being introduced from behind as silhouettes.
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